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- 0:00Okay, imagine this. You get a letter from your
- 0:03doctor and well, instead of this dense jargon
- 0:07filled thing that seems written for, I don't
- 0:10know, someone else entirely. You actually understand
- 0:13it. Everything. Your diagnosis, why they did
- 0:16certain tests, what the treatment really involves,
- 0:19and crucially, what happens next. Right. That
- 0:22moment of clarity. Exactly. That moment where
- 0:24you finally grasp your own health story. That's
- 0:27really what this deep dive is all about today.
- 0:29We've seen how powerful this can be. Patients...
- 0:32talking about finally understanding a diagnosis,
- 0:35maybe years after it was first mentioned, just
- 0:37by reading their notes. It's quite shocking when
- 0:39you hear that, isn't it? It really is. And yet
- 0:41we also know from research that, well, a lot
- 0:44of clinical letters just aren't that easy for
- 0:46patients to read. No, the evidence points that
- 0:48way. So that highlights a critical gap, doesn't
- 0:50it? A sort of fundamental challenge in how we
- 0:52communicate health care information today. So
- 0:55today we are taking a deep dive right into that
- 0:57gap. We're unpacking the whole world of clinical
- 1:00correspondence, focusing specifically on the
- 1:03guidance, the movement towards writing letters
- 1:06to patients, or at least making sure the letters
- 1:08patients get are clear and understandable for
- 1:10them. We've gathered quite a stack of sources
- 1:13for this, you know, important guidance from key
- 1:15players like NHS England, the Academy of Medical
- 1:18Royal Colleges, and specific groups like the
- 1:21Royal College of Psychiatrists, the Radiologists
- 1:23too. Yes, quite comprehensive guidance is emerging.
- 1:26And, crucially, we'll be looking at insights
- 1:28from a service evaluation study gives us a real
- 1:31snapshot of current practice and, importantly,
- 1:34the barriers clinicians actually face in making
- 1:37this shift happen. But you're very real barriers.
- 1:39Definitely. So our mission is to distill what
- 1:42these sources say is needed, why it matters so
- 1:45much, and, well, how it might actually be achieved
- 1:47in practice. OK. And to guide us through all
- 1:49this material, help us make sense of it, we have
- 1:51an expert with us who can synthesize all this
- 1:53guidance and really shed light on the practical
- 1:55side. Welcome. Thank you. It's a really vital
- 1:58area, this, so I'm very pleased to be discussing
- 2:00it. It really feels like sort of a pivotal moment
- 2:03in health care communication, doesn't it? I think
- 2:05it does, yes. So let's dive straight in. The
- 2:07sources, they make it pretty clear. This isn't
- 2:10just a suggestion anymore or a nice to have.
- 2:12There's a real powerful drive towards making
- 2:14sure patients get these letters and can actually
- 2:17understand them. What's the... The fundamental
- 2:20principle behind this shift, where is this imperative
- 2:23coming from? Well, fundamentally, it's rooted
- 2:25right in the ethical and professional duties
- 2:28that clinicians have. If you look at, say, the
- 2:31General Medical Council's good medical practice,
- 2:33the core principle is stated very clearly. Clinicians...
- 2:37must give patients the information they want
- 2:40or need to know in a way they can understand.
- 2:42Right. That seems pretty unambiguous. It is.
- 2:44And it's not exactly a new idea, but how we put
- 2:47it into practice is definitely evolving, giving
- 2:50patients a clear, understandable copy of their
- 2:52clinic letter that's a direct, tangible way to
- 2:55meet that obligation. OK. It moves things beyond
- 2:58just, you know, telling the patient something
- 3:00during what might be quite a rush of consultation.
- 3:02Which often happens. Indeed. It provides a written
- 3:05record they can actually go back to, digest in
- 3:08their own time. So it's really about transparency,
- 3:10then, and making sure information isn't just
- 3:13lost once you walk out the door. Precisely. And
- 3:15it's all part of this much broader move towards
- 3:18genuinely patient -centered care. Historically,
- 3:21as you mentioned right at the start, these letters
- 3:24were mainly, well, doctor -to -doctor communication,
- 3:26weren't they? Yeah, like a handover note. Exactly,
- 3:29a handover, a record for the file. But the whole
- 3:31landscape has shifted. Patients now, quite rightly,
- 3:34expect to be partners in their own health care.
- 3:37And this is reflected in the guidance coming
- 3:38from bodies like the Academy of Medical Royal
- 3:41Colleges. Their Please Write to Me campaign was
- 3:44really significant. Ah, yes, I remember that.
- 3:46And the Professional Records Standards Body,
- 3:49the PRSB, they also set standards for the structure
- 3:52and content of electronic health records, including
- 3:55these letters, specifically with patient access
- 3:58in mind. Even nice guidance often talks about
- 4:01clear communication and shared decision -making.
- 4:04Which needs accessible information. Exactly.
- 4:07You can't have shared decisions without shared
- 4:09understanding. So these bodies, they aren't just
- 4:12recommending this anymore. They're setting clear
- 4:14expectations. Standards that say providing understandable
- 4:18letters directly to patients is becoming the
- 4:21norm, you know, not the exception. So the expectation
- 4:24has changed. It has. It's shifting the primary
- 4:26purpose of the letter. It's still for professional
- 4:28communication, still for the record, but now
- 4:31it has this added crucial purpose of patient
- 4:33empowerment. That framing, shifting from a doctor
- 4:36to doctor record to a patient empowerment tool,
- 4:39that's really powerful, isn't it? I think so,
- 4:40yes. And the sources really hammer home why this
- 4:43matters by highlighting the actual benefits patients
- 4:45see. What do they tell us of the sort of concrete
- 4:47advantages? Well, the benefits that are detailed
- 4:50are quite significant, and they cover several
- 4:52areas. The most obvious one is just better patient
- 4:55understanding. Understanding their diagnosis,
- 4:58the overall care plan, the reasons behind treatment
- 5:01decisions. Makes sense. Think about a consultationship.
- 5:05It can be quite overwhelming, can't it? Patients
- 5:08might only take in a fraction of what's said,
- 5:10especially if it's complex medical stuff. A clear
- 5:13letter gives them a permanent record they can
- 5:14read, reread, maybe share with family. At their
- 5:17own pace. Exactly, at their own pace. And they
- 5:19can clarify things. This increased understanding,
- 5:22it fosters a sense of involvement, of control
- 5:24over their own health, which is absolutely fundamental
- 5:27to a patient -centered approach. Right. But it
- 5:30goes deeper than just understanding. The sources
- 5:33give some really quite stark examples that underline
- 5:36the consequences when this communication doesn't
- 5:38happen well. Oh, like what? Well, cases where
- 5:42patients discovered really significant diagnoses,
- 5:44things like post -traumatic stress disorder,
- 5:46PTSD, or emotionally unstable personality disorder.
- 5:50EUPD, years after these, were initially made
- 5:52by specialists. Years later, how did they find
- 5:56out? They only found out by accessing their old
- 5:59clinical records. You know, going through them
- 6:01painstakingly records that were never clearly
- 6:03communicated or explained to them at the time.
- 6:05Wow, years later. Well, that's staggering. What
- 6:09kind of impact does finding out like that have?
- 6:11Oh, the impact is profound. It means years. potentially
- 6:15lost, years where the patient didn't understand
- 6:18their own condition, didn't have the chance to
- 6:20fully engage with treatment or seek the right
- 6:23support for that diagnosis. You can imagine.
- 6:25It can lead to delayed treatment, massive misunderstandings
- 6:28about their own experiences, and significantly,
- 6:31it just erodes trust in the whole health care
- 6:33system. Of course. If you discover a major diagnosis
- 6:36about yourself sort of hidden away in records
- 6:38you weren't meant to read or couldn't understand
- 6:40if you did, it just creates this huge barrier
- 6:43for the future. Yeah, it sends a terrible message.
- 6:46It sends a message that you weren't seen as a
- 6:49key partner in your own care. And the sources
- 6:52use these examples very explicitly to say. This
- 6:56is precisely why clear, patient -directed communication
- 6:59in letters isn't just good practice. It's essential
- 7:03for ethical care. It's essential for effective
- 7:05treatment. And it's essential for building trusting
- 7:07relationships with patients. So the stakes are
- 7:10incredibly high then. It's not just about administrative
- 7:13tidiness. It's right at the heart of patient
- 7:15outcomes and trust. Absolutely. OK, so let's
- 7:18shift gears a bit from the why to the how. If
- 7:20you're sitting down to write a letter with the
- 7:22patient really in mind, what are the core components
- 7:25that need to be in there, according to this guidance.
- 7:27Okay, well first, it's probably crucial to clarify
- 7:30something. Well, one common way of doing this
- 7:32is to send the patient a copy of the GP letter.
- 7:35Right, the Carver copy approach. Yes. The guidance
- 7:38really emphasizes that the letter must be written
- 7:40with the patient being a primary intended reader.
- 7:43This might mean tailoring the language, maybe
- 7:46even structuring it slightly differently than
- 7:48you would for purely doctor -to -doctor communication.
- 7:50So it's not just hitting copy? Ideally not, no.
- 7:53or at least writing the original, knowing the
- 7:56patient will read it. The letter serves multiple
- 7:58purposes, multiple readers, the team, the GP,
- 8:01the patient. But its effectiveness for the patient
- 8:05has to be paramount if they're receiving it.
- 8:07OK, got it. So what information is essential?
- 8:10Well, the guidance across the various sources
- 8:12is actually pretty consistent on the essential
- 8:14information. It starts with the basics, clear
- 8:17patient details, their GP practice details. Then
- 8:19it moves into the medical specifics, but presented
- 8:22clearly. So the diagnosis, or if it's not firm
- 8:25yet, the suspected diagnosis and how you're going
- 8:27to clarify it. Right. Crucially, known allergies
- 8:30must be stated very clearly. Any medication changes
- 8:33made during or after the appointment need to
- 8:35be detailed. Then there's a really critical section
- 8:39outlining Actions. Actions. Yes. Clear instructions
- 8:42or tasks for different people. So, actions for
- 8:44the GP, actions for maybe the hospital clinician,
- 8:47and really importantly, actions for the patient
- 8:49themselves. Ah, the actions for the patient bit.
- 8:52That seems absolutely vital for clarity, doesn't
- 8:54it? It really is. It helps the patient understand
- 8:56exactly what they need to do next. Is it picking
- 8:59up a prescription, scheduling a follow -up, making
- 9:01a lifestyle change, monitoring symptoms? It needs
- 9:04to be spelled out. Okay. Alongside those actions,
- 9:07the letter should have a concise summary of the
- 9:10appointment itself. Key examination findings,
- 9:13test results discussed. And finally, clear information
- 9:16on the next steps. What's the overall plan? When
- 9:19and how will follow -up happen? And who should
- 9:22they contact if they have questions or problems
- 9:24down the line? That sounds quite comprehensive.
- 9:27It is. And the PRSB, which we mentioned, has
- 9:30been really helpful in standardizing headings
- 9:32for these outpatient letters. Mandatory headings,
- 9:35recommended headings to help clinicians structure
- 9:37all this information logically. That makes it
- 9:40easier for everyone, including the patient, to
- 9:42find what they need quickly. Highlighting that
- 9:44action section, maybe in bold or near the top,
- 9:47is also specifically recommended in some guidance.
- 9:49So clear structure, all the necessary facts.
- 9:52But the real sticking point, and something the
- 9:54research you mentioned highlighted, is the language
- 9:56itself, isn't it? The jargon barrier. How did
- 9:59the sources tackle that? Yes. This is arguably
- 10:02the most significant point. And it's hammered
- 10:05home consistently across all the guidance documents.
- 10:08The mandate is completely unambiguous. Use plain
- 10:13English. Simple. well, simple to say, avoid medical
- 10:16jargon and abbreviations wherever you possibly
- 10:18can. Now, that's much harder to do consistently
- 10:21when you're immersed in medical terminology day
- 10:24in, day out. I can imagine. So the guidance stresses
- 10:26that if you absolutely must use a medical term
- 10:29or an acronym, maybe there's no simple alternative,
- 10:32or it's essential for clarity with other professionals
- 10:34reading the letter, then you must explain it
- 10:36immediately and clearly. In plain language, for
- 10:40the patient. Can you do an example? Sure. So
- 10:42instead of just writing, say, ECG showed AF,
- 10:44you write something more like the heart trace,
- 10:46which is called an ECG, and measures the electrical
- 10:49activity of your heart, showed that your heart
- 10:51rhythm was irregular. This is called atrial fibrillation,
- 10:54or AF, for short. Oh, OK. So you explain the
- 10:58test, the term, and the acronym. Exactly. You
- 11:01unpack it. The Royal College of Psychiatrists'
- 11:04guidance. is particularly good on this, actually,
- 11:06giving loads of examples of how to simplify quite
- 11:08complex psychiatric concepts. Another specific
- 11:12instruction mentioned is using the common English
- 11:15names for medicines, not the Latin ones, which
- 11:17can be, well, totally incomprehensible to patients.
- 11:20It's about constantly asking yourself that question.
- 11:23If I got this letter without my medical training,
- 11:27would I understand every single word, every phrase?
- 11:30That's a really good test to apply, isn't it?
- 11:32And I think the sources even mention specific
- 11:34tools that can help with this. They do, yes.
- 11:37The Academy of Medical Royal College's guidance
- 11:39and also that service evaluation study we talked
- 11:41about, they explicitly mention using readability
- 11:44tools. The Flesh Readability Score is the main
- 11:46one mentioned. Flesh Score? How does that work?
- 11:48It's basically a formula. It looks at average
- 11:51sentence length and the average number of syllables
- 11:53per word in a piece of text. It then calculates
- 11:56a score, usually out of 100. Higher scores mean
- 12:00easier readability. It often corresponds to a
- 12:03U .S. school grade level, so a score of, say,
- 12:0660, 70, is generally considered easily understandable
- 12:09by an average 13, 15 -year -old, which is often
- 12:13used as a benchmark for public information. Okay.
- 12:16And the study used this? Yes. The service evaluation
- 12:18actually applied this flesh score to a sample
- 12:21of real clinical letters. And they found that
- 12:23a high percentage scored quite poorly on readability.
- 12:26So there's actual objective data showing the
- 12:28problem exists in practice. What does a poor
- 12:31score like that actually mean for a patient reading
- 12:33the letter? What means exactly what those patient
- 12:35quotes we discussed earlier illustrate it means
- 12:38difficulty understanding Needing to look things
- 12:40up. Maybe misunderstanding crucial information
- 12:43about their condition or their treatment plan,
- 12:45right? It creates barriers Exactly a letter that
- 12:48scores poorly on the flesh test is highly likely
- 12:51to have too much jargon Sentences that are too
- 12:54long and convoluted and probably poor structure,
- 12:57too This directly undermines those goals of patient
- 13:01empowerment and shared understanding we talked
- 13:03about. Yeah. It really reinforces the need for
- 13:05clinicians to be incredibly mindful of their
- 13:08writing style and maybe even to use these tools
- 13:10sometimes as a check or perhaps for training
- 13:12and feedback. It makes that abstract goal of
- 13:15plain English much more concrete and measurable,
- 13:18doesn't it? It does. It moves it from just subjective
- 13:20feedback. This was hard to read to objective
- 13:23data. The score is 45 on flash. That's really
- 13:26interesting. Precisely. And it underscores that
- 13:28while the principles are clear, actually implementing
- 13:30them takes real effort and attention to detail.
- 13:32Absolutely. Now, health care isn't one size fits
- 13:34all, obviously, and patients are incredibly diverse.
- 13:37The sources also spend quite a bit of time talking
- 13:39about tailoring these letters for specific needs
- 13:42in different clinical areas. How does the guidance
- 13:44handle that complexity? Yes. This is where the
- 13:48picture gets more nuanced. It's particularly
- 13:50highlighted in the Royal College of Psychiatrists'
- 13:52guidance, actually. While those fundamental principles,
- 13:56clarity, plain language, essential content they
- 13:59apply across the board, the way you present the
- 14:01information and the specific details you might
- 14:04include or emphasize absolutely must be adapted.
- 14:08Tailored to the individual. To the individual
- 14:09patient, yes. Their condition, their age, their
- 14:12specific circumstances. A rigid, templated approach
- 14:15just won't work without that flexibility. You
- 14:18really need to think. Who is receiving this letter
- 14:21and what do they need from it? Okay, let's break
- 14:24down some of the specific examples given in the
- 14:26sources What about say older people? What are
- 14:29the considerations there for older people the
- 14:31guidance points to specific things like potential
- 14:33cognitive impairment or memory difficulties?
- 14:35sending a very complex letter or One containing
- 14:39a difficult diagnosis that perhaps the patient
- 14:41doesn't fully recall discussing in the clinic
- 14:43that could be quite distressing Exactly distressing
- 14:46or just confusing So the guidance recommends
- 14:49actually checking with the patient first. Do
- 14:52they want to receive a letter? Particularly if
- 14:54maybe previous letters haven't been well received
- 14:57or caused upset. Right. Ask first. Yes. And in
- 15:00some situations, and this needs really careful
- 15:02thought and discussion with the patient, making
- 15:05sure it's in their best interest and respects
- 15:06their wishes as much as possible, it might be
- 15:09more appropriate for the letter to go to a nominated
- 15:11carer or a family member. To ensure the information
- 15:14gets to someone who can support them. Precisely.
- 15:17to ensure crucial information is available to
- 15:19those supporting them. It's a delicate balance,
- 15:21isn't it? Sharing information effectively while
- 15:23respecting the patient's autonomy and avoiding
- 15:26causing unnecessary distress. It sounds like
- 15:28it. And what about for children and adolescents?
- 15:30That seems like a completely different challenge
- 15:32again. Oh, it absolutely is. The approach in
- 15:35Child and Adolescent Mental Health Services,
- 15:37CAMHS, which is detailed in the psychiatric guidance,
- 15:41needs to be incredibly flexible. It has to respond
- 15:44to the child's developmental stage, their capacity
- 15:47to understand. For younger children, obviously,
- 15:50a traditional detailed clinic letter addressed
- 15:53to them just isn't appropriate. No. So you might
- 15:55send a much simpler letter directly to the child,
- 15:58maybe using very simple language, large font,
- 16:01perhaps even pictures or symbols. Ah, interesting.
- 16:03Focusing on key positive messages or actions
- 16:06relevant to them, like remember to try that breathing
- 16:08exercise we talked about. And then at the same
- 16:10time, a more detailed letter With all the clinical
- 16:14information, we'd go to the parents or guardians.
- 16:16Okay, so two versions potentially. Potentially,
- 16:19yes. And as adolescents get older, as their capacity
- 16:22to understand and make decisions increases, the
- 16:24communication has to adapt again. For older competent
- 16:28teenagers, you might need to tailor the letter
- 16:30primarily to them. Maybe even send it only to
- 16:33them, depending on confidentiality considerations
- 16:35and their wishes. Much like you would for an
- 16:37adult. Right, respecting their growing autonomy.
- 16:40Exactly. The guidance also mentions using tools
- 16:42during the consultation for children. Things
- 16:45like crib sheets with pictures or symbols that
- 16:48explain key concepts or plans visually. They
- 16:51can then take that home, so it supplements the
- 16:53formal letter that goes to the GP and appropriate
- 16:56family members. So thinking beyond just the traditional
- 16:59letter format as well, perhaps using other tools?
- 17:03Exactly that. It's about using all the communication
- 17:05tools you have available and tailoring them to
- 17:07your audience. And in CMHS, that means recognizing
- 17:11you often have multiple audiences with very different
- 17:14needs. Makes sense. And the guidance touches
- 17:16on nuances in other areas, too. For instance,
- 17:19in eating disorder services, the letter content
- 17:22will likely need to include specific numbers
- 17:23that might be sensitive but are clinically vital.
- 17:27current weight, height, BMI, progress towards
- 17:30target weight, that sort of thing. Liaison psychiatry
- 17:33leaders often need to explicitly link mental
- 17:35health issues to physical health conditions that
- 17:38might be underlying or co -occurring. Forensic
- 17:41psychiatry leaders have to include summaries
- 17:43of relevant forensic history, details of legal
- 17:46status, like detention under the Mental Health
- 17:48Act, which needs very specific, careful phrasing.
- 17:52Right, very specific requirements there. Yes,
- 17:55and in oncology there are already established
- 17:57templates for things like treatment summaries.
- 18:00These need to detail complex chemo or radiotherapy
- 18:03plans, and really critically, provide crystal
- 18:06clear instructions on how to manage potential
- 18:08side effects. The complexity there and the potential
- 18:11seriousness of side effects just demands exceptional
- 18:14clarity and accessibility. That really highlights
- 18:16how specific the content needs can be in different
- 18:18specialties. Sticking with the psychiatric guidance
- 18:21for a moment, which seems particularly detailed
- 18:24on this, there's a strong focus on handling sensitive
- 18:26information and maybe potential disagreements
- 18:28very carefully in the letter. Could you give
- 18:30us a bit more insight into that aspect? Yes,
- 18:33this is a really crucial and quite subtle aspect
- 18:36of writing letters that patients will actually
- 18:39read, especially in psychiatry. The language
- 18:41used to describe someone's internal experiences,
- 18:44their behavior, it can be highly charged, can't
- 18:46it? Absolutely. The letter is a formal record.
- 18:48And if it uses language that feels judgmental
- 18:51or dismissive or just inaccurate from the patient's
- 18:55viewpoint, it can be incredibly damaging, damaging
- 18:58to trust, damaging to the therapeutic relationship.
- 19:01So how does the guidance suggest phrasing things?
- 19:04It gives specific practical examples. One key
- 19:06area is how you talk about a patient's perspective
- 19:09when it differs from the clinical view. The guidance
- 19:12strongly advises against using phrases like the
- 19:15patient having no insight into their condition.
- 19:17Why is that? because it sounds like a definitive,
- 19:20negative judgment on the patient. Instead, it
- 19:22suggests a more descriptive, more respectful
- 19:24approach that acknowledges both perspectives
- 19:26are present. The example given is excellent,
- 19:29I think. Instead of writing, patient has no insight
- 19:33into schizophrenia. You could write something
- 19:35like, I explained that my view is that these
- 19:38experiences are part of an illness called paranoid
- 19:40schizophrenia, and you disagree with this view.
- 19:43You do, however, agree that you are not currently
- 19:45feeling very well, and you are willing to follow
- 19:47the plan we discussed below. Ah, I see the difference.
- 19:50It acknowledges the clinician's view, states
- 19:53the patient's disagreement factually, but then
- 19:55finds calming ground on the plan. Exactly. It's
- 19:59objective reporting of a difference in perspective,
- 20:01rather than a loaded judgment about the patient's
- 20:04insight. It validates their stated position while
- 20:07still getting the clinical formulation across
- 20:09for other professionals. That's a really tangible
- 20:11difference in phrasing, isn't it? Much more respectful.
- 20:14It is. Another example they give is avoiding
- 20:16the word deny, particularly when reporting what
- 20:18a patient says about potentially stigmatizing
- 20:20behavior like maybe substance use. Why avoid
- 20:23deny? Because saying a patient denied taking
- 20:26drugs carries this subtle implication that you,
- 20:30the clinician, believe they're taking them and
- 20:32are being untruthful. Right. It sounds accusatory.
- 20:35It can do. So the guidance recommends replacing
- 20:38it with just objective reporting of what the
- 20:40patient said. So instead of patient denied taking
- 20:43illicit substances, you'd simply write, Patient
- 20:46reports not taking any illicit substances. It's
- 20:49a small change, but it removes that implied judgment.
- 20:52It does. It just reports the patient's statement.
- 20:54The example of Mrs. Pointer is another great
- 20:56illustration of this sensitive reporting. She's
- 20:58described as a patient with dementia who has
- 21:01fixed beliefs about her neighbors entering her
- 21:03house. Okay. The letter to her needed to communicate
- 21:06the clinical understanding of this, but without
- 21:08being confrontational or just dismissing her
- 21:11lived experience, which is very real to her.
- 21:13Very. The guidance suggests phrasing it carefully.
- 21:17The letter explicitly states the doctor's view
- 21:19that these experiences are likely related to
- 21:23your memory problems, and it uses the clinical
- 21:25terms delusions and hallucinations. But it immediately
- 21:29balances this by adding something like, you are
- 21:32clear that your neighbors are making the noises
- 21:33in your house, and you did not agree with my
- 21:36suggestion that these experiences might be linked
- 21:38to your memory problems. So again, presenting
- 21:41both sides. Precisely. presenting the clinical
- 21:44interpretation and the patient's strongly held
- 21:46differing perspective. It demonstrates respect
- 21:49while still maintaining the necessary clinical
- 21:51record. It sounds that the underlying principle
- 21:53is report the facts, report the differing perspectives
- 21:56neutrally, don't embed clinical judgment in a
- 21:59way that feels invalidating to the person reading
- 22:01it. That's a very good summary of it, yes. What
- 22:03about including something like the mental state
- 22:05examination, the MSE? That must feel quite clinical,
- 22:09maybe a bit odd for a patient to read about themselves.
- 22:11Yes, the mental state examination is, you know,
- 22:13a standard part of any psychiatric assessment.
- 22:16So it's a necessary component of the clinical
- 22:18letter for professional communication. But you're
- 22:21right, reading a description of your own appearance,
- 22:23your mood, your thoughts, your perceptions, all
- 22:26in clinical language, they can feel very strange
- 22:29indeed for a patient. I can imagine. How does
- 22:31the guidance suggest handling that? It acknowledges
- 22:35it directly. They suggest handling it by actually
- 22:38explaining what the MSE is for right there in
- 22:41the letter to the patient. Ah, explaining its
- 22:43purpose. Yes. The example phrasing suggests describing
- 22:47it as something like a brief description of how
- 22:49you seemed during the appointment in terms of
- 22:51your appearance and how you were thinking and
- 22:53feeling. And then crucially, they suggest adding
- 22:56context, like this might seem strange to read,
- 23:00but these snapshots are useful in keeping track
- 23:02of how you were doing over time. OK, so it frames
- 23:05it. It frames it. It preempts the patient's likely
- 23:08reaction. Why are they writing about how I looked?
- 23:13And frames that section not as some sort of clinical
- 23:16dissection of them, but as a useful tool. for
- 23:19tracking their progress, their journey. It makes
- 23:21it feel less alienating, hopefully. That makes
- 23:24sense. It's about providing context and purpose
- 23:27for potentially confusing clinical stuff. Exactly.
- 23:30It really highlights that every single part of
- 23:32the letter needs thinking about from the patient's
- 23:34viewpoint, doesn't it? It really does. We've
- 23:37touched on the patient perspective quite a few
- 23:38times, but let's dive a bit deeper into the actual
- 23:41experience of receiving and reading these letters
- 23:43as described in the sources. What did they find?
- 23:46Well, The patient quotes included in some of
- 23:48the source documents are incredibly insightful,
- 23:50I think, because they capture the real emotional
- 23:53weight these letters can carry. Right. It's not
- 23:55just about transferring information. It's about
- 23:57encountering this formal written description
- 23:59of yourself and your health challenges. Yeah.
- 24:02As one patient apparently said, reading their
- 24:04notes made me realize the reality of my mental
- 24:07health. So for some, it brings a difficult truth
- 24:10into much sharper focus. A moment of reckoning,
- 24:13perhaps? Perhaps. For others, the experience
- 24:16can be quite uncomfortable. One quote was, read
- 24:20the notes and cringe. Sometimes I didn't even
- 24:23recognize the person, would just rip it up. Wow.
- 24:27That really underscores that the language, the
- 24:29tone, the content, they aren't just academic
- 24:31points, are they? They have a real tangible emotional
- 24:35impact on the reader. A poorly written letter.
- 24:37even if it's factually correct from a clinical
- 24:40standpoint, could be quite distressing, maybe
- 24:42even triggering for some people. Definitely.
- 24:44But conversely, a clear, sensitive letter can
- 24:47provide immense relief and validation. It reinforces
- 24:50the information discussed in the consultation,
- 24:52which, as we said, can easily be partially forgotten
- 24:54or misunderstood in the moment. Gives you something
- 24:56concrete? Yes. It lets patients process information
- 24:59at their own speed, on their own terms. It helps
- 25:02move them from being just a passive recipient
- 25:04of care towards being a more active participant.
- 25:07And accuracy seems absolutely fundamental here.
- 25:10Not just clinical accuracy for the record, but
- 25:13factual accuracy from the patient's perspective
- 25:15as a way to build trust. Precisely. The guidance
- 25:18explicitly links giving patients access to their
- 25:22letters with the opportunity for them to check
- 25:24for factual accuracy. Now, this isn't really
- 25:27about debating clinical opinions necessarily.
- 25:30More about the facts. More about ensuring dates
- 25:32are right. Symptoms are described as the patient
- 25:35actually reported them. The plan reflects what
- 25:37was agreed in the room. One patient quote, highlights
- 25:41this perfectly describing how they and their
- 25:43husband read a letter and had. a matter of interpretation.
- 25:47Ah, interesting. It points to the fact that even
- 25:49with clear communication, different people can
- 25:52take different meanings from the same words,
- 25:53can't they? Especially if it's complex or describes
- 25:56subjective experiences. Very true. So giving
- 25:59patients the chance to say, actually, that wasn't
- 26:01quite what I meant or hang on, this data is wrong,
- 26:04that strengthens the relationship. It shows the
- 26:06clinician values, their perspective is committed
- 26:09to getting an accurate shared understanding.
- 26:11It shifts the dynamic, doesn't it? How so? Well,
- 26:14it shifts it from one where the clinician is
- 26:16the sole owner of the truth recorded in the letter
- 26:19to one where the patient is actually a partner
- 26:21in making sure the record reflects their experience
- 26:23accurately. A partner in accuracy. I like that.
- 26:27And how can clinicians actively encourage that
- 26:30feedback loop and maybe use it to improve? Well,
- 26:32the guidance recommends actively inviting feedback
- 26:35on the letters themselves, both from patients
- 26:38and also from other clinicians who receive them.
- 26:40like the GP. Okay. This is framed as a really
- 26:43crucial step for continuous quality improvement,
- 26:47improving communication skills. For a clinician,
- 26:50adapting their letter writing practice, maybe
- 26:52trying out new templates, really focusing on
- 26:54plain language that can be a powerful quality
- 26:57improvement project. Right, something tangible
- 26:59for appraisal. Exactly. seeking structured feedback
- 27:02from patients. You know, was this letter clear?
- 27:05Did it help you understand your condition and
- 27:06plan? What could we improve? And also from colleagues,
- 27:10was the relevant information easy to find? Was
- 27:13the terminology clear? It provides concrete data,
- 27:17data for reflection, for development. Makes sense.
- 27:19And the sources do mention that this whole process,
- 27:22reflecting on and improving communication, including
- 27:25letter writing, can and absolutely should be
- 27:28included in clinicians' professional appraisal
- 27:31portfolios. It links this vital skill directly
- 27:34to professional accountability and growth. So
- 27:37it's not just some abstract ideal floating out
- 27:40there. There are concrete mechanisms within professional
- 27:43development frameworks to actually encourage
- 27:45this. That's right. OK. We've talked a lot about
- 27:48the what and the why and how ideally this should
- 27:50all work. But that service evaluation study you
- 27:53mentioned also looked at the reality on the ground.
- 27:55you know, the barriers clinicians actually face
- 27:58in implementing this shift towards writing patient
- 28:01-friendly letters. What did that study find?
- 28:03What are the hurdles? Yes, that evaluation provided
- 28:05some really valuable practical insights. It surveyed
- 28:08clinicians to understand what was stopping them
- 28:10or making it difficult to consistently write
- 28:13letters with the patient as a primary audience
- 28:15or to tailor their existing letters appropriately.
- 28:18And what came back? Well, perhaps unsurprisingly,
- 28:20it showed that practice is still quite variable.
- 28:23Many of the letters they actually reviewed were
- 28:26still primarily written for the GP. And as we
- 28:29discussed earlier with the readability scores,
- 28:31they often weren't that easy for a layperson
- 28:33to understand. Okay. So what were the barriers
- 28:36clinicians mentioned? They were quite varied.
- 28:39Some clinicians indicated a perceived lack of
- 28:41need for change. You know, what we do now is
- 28:44fine. Or maybe just a lack of awareness that
- 28:47writing for the patient was actually the recommended
- 28:49standard now. Right. Lack of awareness. Resources
- 28:52were also mentioned things like access to specific
- 28:54software features, maybe templates or dedicated
- 28:56training time. But of a very significant barrier
- 29:00reported by a really high percentage of clinicians
- 29:02was simply time constraints. Ah, time, the perennial
- 29:06issue in health care. Always. The perception
- 29:08was... quite clearly that tailoring a letter
- 29:11specifically for a patient simplifying the language,
- 29:14maybe using a different template, would just
- 29:16take significantly longer than their established
- 29:18process, which is often dictating a standard
- 29:21letter aimed mainly at the GP. Right. Dictating
- 29:24the usual letter is quicker. So are there practical
- 29:27strategies suggested in the guidance or other
- 29:30sources to help clinicians overcome these, well,
- 29:33very real time and resource barriers? Yes, thankfully
- 29:37the guidance does offer some pragmatic solutions.
- 29:40One key strategy that comes up repeatedly is
- 29:42the use of available templates. Pre -made structures.
- 29:46Exactly. Bodies like the PRSB, the Royal College
- 29:49of Radiologists, McMillan Cancer Support. They've
- 29:52already developed templates for outpatient letters
- 29:54for treatment summaries that incorporate the
- 29:57recommended structure, the right headings, including
- 29:59things like actions for patient. Using these
- 30:02predefined templates can significantly cut down
- 30:05the time needed to structure the letter and helps
- 30:07ensure all the essential bits are included consistently.
- 30:10So don't reinvent the wheel every time. Precisely.
- 30:12Use the tools that are already designed with
- 30:14these principles built in. Makes sense. What
- 30:16else? For clinicians who dictate their letters,
- 30:19the RCR guidance specifically mentions improving
- 30:22dictation as a skill itself. This involves speaking
- 30:25clearly, structuring the dictation logically
- 30:28following the desired letter endings, and, crucially,
- 30:31working closely with administrative staff, with
- 30:33secretaries. How does that help? Well, working
- 30:36with them on using predefined styles or templates
- 30:39within the dictation system or the electronic
- 30:41health record software. Training for both clinicians
- 30:44and secretaries on efficient, patient -aware
- 30:48dictation and transcription that can streamline
- 30:50the whole process considerably. It makes it more
- 30:53of a team effort. They're leveraging administrative
- 30:55expertise to support the clinical goal. Okay,
- 30:57using the whole team. Yes. And there are also
- 31:00some crucial practical points about the medium
- 31:02of communication. The guidance is very clear.
- 31:04You must get consent for the patient before sending
- 31:07letters electronically. Obvious reasons, privacy,
- 31:10security. Absolutely critical. And perhaps most
- 31:12importantly, and this is reiterated very strongly
- 31:14across the sources, it's a fundamental ethical
- 31:16point. A letter should never be the first time
- 31:19a patient receives upsetting or difficult news.
- 31:21Never break bad news in a letter. Absolutely
- 31:24not. That includes diagnoses of serious illness,
- 31:27significant changes in prognosis, informing a
- 31:30patient about a major adverse event. That always
- 31:32requires a sensitive, direct conversation face
- 31:36-to -face ideally, or maybe a planned phone call.
- 31:39The letter's role is to summarize and reinforce
- 31:41information that's already been discussed verbally.
- 31:44Right, it supports the conversation. It supports
- 31:45the conversation. It must never replace the difficult
- 31:47parts of it. That's about managing patient expectations
- 31:50properly and avoiding causing significant distress
- 31:54through what can feel like very impersonal written
- 31:56communication. That ethical constraint is so,
- 31:59so important to remember, isn't it? And framing
- 32:01this whole shift as a quality improvement activity,
- 32:04as you mentioned earlier, that seems like quite
- 32:06a clever way to integrate it into a clinician's
- 32:09existing workflow and priorities, perhaps. I
- 32:11think it provides a really useful framework for
- 32:13action, yes. Instead of seeing it as just another
- 32:16burden, another task to add on, clinicians can
- 32:19approach adapting their letter writing as a structured
- 32:22project. A project aimed squarely at improving
- 32:25patient care and communication effectiveness.
- 32:28How might that look? Well, by setting specific
- 32:31goals, maybe aiming for a certain readability
- 32:33score in their letters, or committing to using
- 32:36patient -friendly templates for a particular
- 32:38clinic, and then actively seeking feedback, they
- 32:41can demonstrate professional growth, meet appraisal
- 32:43requirements, and directly benefit their patients
- 32:46all at the same time. It beds this crucial communication
- 32:50skill firmly within the core clinical work, doesn't
- 32:53it? Rather than leaving it as some sort of separate
- 32:55admin task. Right. It shifts the perspective
- 32:58from simply, oh, I have to write this letter
- 32:59to something more like, I'm using this letter
- 33:02as a tool to partner with my patient and make
- 33:04sure they are truly informed and involved. That's
- 33:07a powerful shift in perspective. Well, this deep
- 33:09dive has really opened up the perhaps surprisingly
- 33:12complex world of clinical letters for me and
- 33:14hopefully for you, our listener too. We started
- 33:18with that really powerful image, didn't we, of
- 33:21a patient finally understanding their health
- 33:23through reading a letter. And we've traced the
- 33:25journey right from the core ethical imperative
- 33:28in documents like Good Medical Practice through
- 33:31the specific guidance from major bodies on what
- 33:34needs to be in these letters, the essential content,
- 33:37and critically, that need for plain understandable
- 33:40language may be supported by tools like the Flesh
- 33:43Score. Yes, the how -to. Exactly. We've delved
- 33:46into the vital need for for tailoring letters
- 33:48to different patient groups, different clinical
- 33:50specialties, exploring the really nuanced and
- 33:53sensitive language required, especially in areas
- 33:56like psychiatry, using those real world examples
- 33:59of how you phrase difficult information respectfully.
- 34:01Which is so important. Absolutely. We've heard
- 34:03about the significant emotional impact these
- 34:05letters can have, the importance of transparency
- 34:08and accuracy for building trust, and the real
- 34:10value of inviting feedback as a quality improvement
- 34:13measure. Closing the - Yes. And we've squarely
- 34:16faced the practical barriers clinicians encounter
- 34:19time, awareness, resources, alongside the concrete
- 34:23strategies offered in the guidance to help overcome
- 34:25them. Things like using templates, improving
- 34:27dictation skills, working as a team while always,
- 34:31always remembering that fundamental - ethical
- 34:34rule about never delivering bad news via letter.
- 34:37A crucial takeaway. Definitely. You know, thinking
- 34:40about everything we've discussed, the absolute
- 34:42necessity of knowing your audience, using plain
- 34:45language, structuring information clearly, understanding
- 34:47the emotional weight your written words can carry,
- 34:50it really makes you think how these principles
- 34:52extend far beyond just the clinical letter, doesn't
- 34:55it? It does, absolutely. How often do we write
- 34:57emails or reports or briefing documents in our
- 34:59own professional lives that are just packed with
- 35:01jargon or acronyms? assuming our audience has
- 35:04exactly the same background knowledge we do.
- 35:07This deep dive into patient letters, it feels
- 35:10like a really powerful reminder that clear, audience
- 35:13-tailored communication is a skill that's vital
- 35:15in, well, countless professional contexts. It's
- 35:19universally applicable, I think. I agree. Now,
- 35:21if you found this deep dive helpful and perhaps
- 35:24thought provoking, please do consider rating
- 35:27and sharing the show. It genuinely helps more
- 35:29people discover these important discussions and
- 35:31hopefully gain some valuable insights. Thank
- 35:34you so much for guiding us through this complex
- 35:37but absolutely essential area of health care
- 35:40communication today. It's been fascinating. It's
- 35:42been a real pleasure improving how we communicate
- 35:44in writing with patients. It just has such a
- 35:47tangible positive impact on their health journey.
- 35:50It really matters. It certainly does. And thank
- 35:52you, our listener, for joining us on the Deep
- 35:54Dive.